After talking to Jason about my project, I have decided the next time I shoot I am going to focus on getting more close up portrait shots. This isolates the model from the rest of the scene and emphasises my theme of feeling isolated in a public place. I am also going to try and get the model in the frame but not in the centre of attention. I filmed a lot of shots of the model walking, tracking her movement, Jason suggested I cut some of these shots out as the audience could think that she is walking to meet someone.

For my Next shoot I am definitely going to focus on getting the close up portraits of the model, really showing her emotion to the audience to feel her sense of isolation. I am also going to play around with having the model in the scene but not in a immediately obvious place, this will gives the effect of people moving on but the model being isolated in the scene. Rochester Christmas market is coming up so this will be a good location to shoot. To have everyone in high spirits compared to my model will be a good opportunity to get some good shooting results.